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2. So the feedback kind of taught me that I should be more consistent with my message, and I agree the last one was all over the place this one I changed it up a little and tried to stay consistent with getting new riders into the sport.

3. So what I did was tried to stay on point the whole time sticking to the same message of getting new riders into the sport. I also tried to be a little less gloomy in my speech. Finally I did this whole thing off the top of my head, which I hope helped with tone instead of a boring reading voice.

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