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I didn't really change anything since I didn't get any feedback on my first post.

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  1. KadisonMarch 18, 2019 at 10:38 AM

    Hey Richard! Sorry to see you didnt get any feedback on your last post. This pitch was done extremely well, from your hand movements to your explanation of the new motorcycle technology. The only feedback I would offer would be to use more inflection in your voice (mainly with pitch) and to use the pitch itself to talk to consumers. Great idea!

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  2. Casey McClureMarch 18, 2019 at 9:55 PM

    Hey Richard, I didn't watch your first post but this elevator pitch was fantastic. Your eye contact and the way you delivered your message was absolutely perfect. It's important to be consistent with your message and what you're offering to your potential customer. I think your product has a lot of potential but it all depends on how you get the product to the people that need it. Great post, keep up the good work, looking forward to reading more in the future.

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